My parents took me to see Singin’ in the Rain on Saturday. They were showing it downtown on
the big screen and it was awesome.
But, as I watched for probably the hundredth time, I suddenly
saw it from a different perspective- oddly enough, I saw it through Lina Lamont’s
eyes.
We tend to simply see her as the villain, as the one who
causes trouble for Don and Kathy. She’s fun to laugh and poke fun at and she’s
simply there to cause trouble. She’s very one sided, very much a villain from
the 50’s.
But, as I watched, the writer in me started to mold her into
a different kind of villain. I started trying to see into her, in to how she
ticked and work, and tried to find the motives behind what she did. And, I
realized, if that movie were made in a different time, Lina Lamont could have
been a much more interesting villain.
But, she’s not. She’s just a cardboard cutout posing as a
villain to move the story along (don’t get me wrong, I still love that movie, I’m
just not impressed as a writer with the way the villain’s portrayed…)
One of my favorite quotes ever about villains is by Tom
Hiddeston- “Every villain thinks he’s a
hero in his own mind.”
See, we tend to forget villains are human. That they are
people with thoughts and feelings and desires. They want things just as badly
as the hero does and will work just as hard to get them. They have things they
care about and love and there are things that make them laugh and cry just like
us.
But, we’re scared to admit that because if we do, then
suddenly, it’s a lot harder to hate them. And, we need to hate the villain.
Because that’s good, right?
Personally, I don’t
think so. Creating people our readers hate is easy. It’s almost the lazy way
out. And, it’s not how we’re really supposed to live. We shouldn’t divide
people into categories of good and bad and then root for the good one and hope
the bad die.
But that’s what literature teaches us. We’re taught from a
young age to learn who to love in stories and who to hate. Who is good and who
is bad.
And then that’s what translates into our lives. We divide
people into groups of good and bad and when someone gets up into the bad
category, that’s that. There’s no turning back.
Yet, God teaches us that there is hope for the worst of
sinners. That anyone who desires to can change. That we don’t have to remain in
our filth forever.
So why aren’t we portraying that in our stories? Why do we
insist on cardboard villains who are nothing more than a vehicle to move the
story along? Why does their development begin and end with “villain”?
I think it’s because we’re afraid of making our villains too
real. We’re afraid that if we make them human it will hit too close to home and
we’ll start seeing ourselves in them. We’re afraid of finding out just how fine
the line between hero and villain really is.
A truly great villain is one who people are conflicted
about. He should be someone your readers want to root for. They want him to succeed.
Obviously not in the ways he wants succeed but in other ways. They should want
your villain to change to be better.
And, at the same time, he should scare them because they
should see themselves in his thoughts and actions. He should mirror the reader’s
fears about the person they’re scared of becoming.
Your villain should always represent a negative ideal. They
should always be evil and cruel and violent. But, they should also be human.
There should be a reason why they’re the way they are, a believable reason we
can relate to. It can be something twisted and insane, but it needs to be a
path the human mind can follow. “Because they’re evil” is no longer an
acceptable motive for a villain’s actions. Readers deserve more than that.
So, I’d like to challenge you to take a long, hard look at
your villain and see where he fits. Is he a cardboard cutout or a human being?
Does he have things that make him smile or afraid? Does he feel love and pain
and loss and joy? Or are his emotions simply a mirror of the evil he
represents?
Is your villain going to be a person or a vehicle? If you’re
going to work so hard to create a hero and supporting cast of characters who
are both human and complex, why short change yourself when it comes to the
villain?
You owe it to yourself and your readers to create something
more than that.
How about you? Who are your favorite villains and why do you think they’re
such great characters?
Also, my email is
still open if you haven’t sent in a question this week for Candor Fridays yet (http://ivorypalace.blogspot.com/2014/07/candor-fridays-come-ask-questions-to.html)
Looking forward to hearing from all of you!
The villain I really like "dissecting" is Captain Hook. Because, especially in the book, there's this moment where Hook has a chance to change- and he comes within a breath of doing it. But, in that wavering moment- he rejects the good and embraces the evil. That's what makes a villain a villain. Heroes make mistakes too. They do stuff wrong. A lot of them even kill people. But when push comes to shove and the stakes are high, the hero, in his moment of wavering, makes the right call. The villain doesn't. #2cents
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